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Jus a pic I'm planning on using for the layout on
the yaoi side of Toritsuki (my personal web site). This is a really, really, REALLY rough sketch in dire need of some red-penning, or
something. *sweatdrops* I am the crappiest couple draw-er on the planet, and thus am having a bit of trouble with this pose. It's
Liyth and Kawai, and they're supposed to be snuggling but... *sighs* Yeah. Crappy couple draw-er, and all.
I'm happy with how they turned out individually (especially Kawai!! He actually almost looks like a guy! A guy over the age of 15! Yeah!!!) but
am having trouble getting the interacting to happen. *sighs* So, yeah, help please? *chibi eyes*
~Tsuno Pikash: 'The Hyperactive Chibi'
the yaoi side of Toritsuki (my personal web site). This is a really, really, REALLY rough sketch in dire need of some red-penning, or
something. *sweatdrops* I am the crappiest couple draw-er on the planet, and thus am having a bit of trouble with this pose. It's
Liyth and Kawai, and they're supposed to be snuggling but... *sighs* Yeah. Crappy couple draw-er, and all.
I'm happy with how they turned out individually (especially Kawai!! He actually almost looks like a guy! A guy over the age of 15! Yeah!!!) but
am having trouble getting the interacting to happen. *sighs* So, yeah, help please? *chibi eyes*
~Tsuno Pikash: 'The Hyperactive Chibi'
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you were saying your having trouble with getting them to look like their interacting, so here are a few suggestions.
the one to the right looks distracted like he's thinking about something else, like he's total uncommitted to the cuddling.
If you want it to seem more like he's committed to the cuddling you should have his eyes closed, or his eyes on his cuddle partner. this shows that he's either focusing on the feeling of his partner being there, or he's thinking about his partner.
the one to the left has an expression on his face that makes me think of someone looking at a shiny new ring. It looks greedy and distracted. At first I thought he was looking at a ring on his hand. I think he would look better with his eyes closed, as if he's focusing on his partner.
Last suggestion, I think they would look more cozy if the one on the left's head was nuzzling up against the others chin.
the one to the right looks distracted like he's thinking about something else, like he's total uncommitted to the cuddling.
If you want it to seem more like he's committed to the cuddling you should have his eyes closed, or his eyes on his cuddle partner. this shows that he's either focusing on the feeling of his partner being there, or he's thinking about his partner.
the one to the left has an expression on his face that makes me think of someone looking at a shiny new ring. It looks greedy and distracted. At first I thought he was looking at a ring on his hand. I think he would look better with his eyes closed, as if he's focusing on his partner.
Last suggestion, I think they would look more cozy if the one on the left's head was nuzzling up against the others chin.